Introduction:
a) There are various aspects of Miami Dade College that can be improved.
b) The main issues are, food, parking, athletics, technology improvements, and the quality of student life.
Body #1-Issues :
a) Bad WiFi coverage
b) Bad food, more variety
c) More parking options
d) More sports teams
e) Bad computer software
f) Bad campus environment
g) Lack of student life
Body #2-Improvements that can be made:
a) Improve WiFi coverage by utilizing signal extenders.
b) Improve food by adding food franchises.
c) To improve parking, add a parking garage and utilize unused land.
d) Add more sports teams (This may also help improve student life).
e) Buy legal copies of current Windows 8 software.
f) Improve the campus environment by, planting more trees, flowers, and more art displays.
g) Improve the lack of student life by having more events or activities for students.
Conclusion:
a) By making these changes, Miami Dade College can greatly improve it’s student’s college experience.
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